Wednesday, March 07, 2007

I'm collaborating with yes4possible at the RonStoppable.net boards on a comic based on her fanfic "Between Jobs". Here's the first 3 pages of script:

PAGE ONE

MAIN PANEL

Long shot, crowd. We see Shego, glancing nervously at a passing cop. wearing a sports coat over her normal clothes, wearing a blonde wig.

NARRATIVE CAPTION: Running. Yes, running. Not much to say about it. I’m on the run from the law, again.

INSET: Shego rounds a street corner.

NARRATIVE CAOTION: I’m in this little hole of a town called Mooseburg, with a hundred dollars from a failed robbery. Little Miss Prom Queen had to butt her nose in it.

PAGE 2:

Shego is passing an alley. A young girl who looked to be around 13 years old was being held against her will by 3 guys, all of whom looked to be a couple of years older, maybe 16 or 17 years old.

DIALOGUE:

GIRL: Please leave me alone, get off of me please

GOON 1: Don't fight it baby, you know you can't resist me baby.

Inset: Shego, alerted to the happenings. Eyes wide.

Girl (off panel): Please leave me alone!

Inset 2:

Shego, angry.

GOON 1 (off panel): Enough of this. Who do you think you are talking to?

PAGE 3:

Shot of the alley. Goons look at Shego, mostly shadowed, except 1 glowing hand and her chest.

SHEGO: I think she is talking to a creep who doesn't know he is not wanted.

NARRATIVE CAPTION (directly above title) Life... What can I say? This is my life. My story. What happens…

*TITLE: Between Jobs*


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